Laying upon my back
Awaiting your return
Still fully clothed
With the sound of the key turning
I prepare myself
Undressing down to my panties
A sense of urgency comes over me
It's been so long
Since we've been alone
I try to bury myself under the sheets
But the moment you come in
You look at me with such a hunger
I slowly remove the sheet
And invite you in
To make love to me once again
In a list
A contest entry
- Lights On Or Off? /adult by piccola.
900 points, ended June 29, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Melt (pic prompt) by IrishGypsyRose.
900 points, ended July 17, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I enjoyed this...sweetly sensual...speaking of a long wait between love making sessions. Good meter, nice flow, one typo. Stanza 4 line 4 needs the word me inserted after teh word it...just thought I'd point that out. All in all good read. Best of wishes in the contest. ~mandie~
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I know the feeling ... of wanting to hide that is. This is really well written and the imagery is great. thank you for entering.
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Think I'll shower after
... with you... Wondefully sensual... This is so intensely human that the images just leap off the page... Well done!
Ken
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*raises hand*
lol......... loved this... what a great job you have done here..... thank you for sharing now i must shower again... and good luck in contest!!!!!!!!!! -
lol very good sweety
well done -
pphheeww!!! man!!! anyone else need a really ice cold shower raise your hand!!! *raises hand* lol.. You did a wonderful job hun!! I really liked the softness to this.. You created a really sweet and loving story, the image was almost...innocent in a way yet really enticing too..lol.. best of luck hun...
Angel
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dang it girl! this was hot. this is like "i'm gonna have to take a cold shower now" type of stuff.
very grrr
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