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Crimson Vision

She
has eyes that see,
the places
in between those
moments
no one should feel;
but I fear
what she knows
and thinks,
for I am less
than she'll
ever be.

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    June 27, 2008
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    Thank you for the entry. Best wishes.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Very beautiful and sad...lovely flow and imagery...those eyes do make you think, how one may see through mask we wear and there we find ourselves less worthy...nicely done...
    best to you!