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All the Tricks of Wonderland








She showed me all the tricks of wonderland
I read her body like it was a book.
She let me explore her sweet never land.

We loved on a bed and  loved on a strand
There was no end to the beauty of her look.
She showed me all the tricks of wonderland

We would do things I did not understand,
But into wild lust my body she took.
She let me explore her sweet never land.

I always obeyed her every demand.
And she read me as if I were a book.
She showed me all the tricks of wonderland

Discovered her touch  and length it spanned.
How hot our desire would sizzle and cook.
She let me explore her sweet never land.

Easily I was  hers by touch of hand
Memories babble in me like a brook
She showed me all the tricks of never land.
She let me explore her sweet never land.





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  • dOgTaGz
    July 1

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    Okay this poem was too cute. I loved it. It was like so awesome. Good luck on the contest.


    P.S.

    please re-read the rules because you dont have what I asked in your notes,you only have your option.

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 27
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    Ok this just sizzled! Love, C

  • A nicely penned piece of form and flow. Such intrigue coasting through the lines. A piece of longing and satisfaction. Great piece!

    [[last stanza, line 3: Did you mean wonderland?]]