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Blind Steps and Blind Thoughts

I'm a dissapointment
To my parents, to my friends
To every guy I ever date
All I ever see's the end
And everytime I start over
I do it all again

So let me repeat it
This is the last time
Because this love isn't a bomb
Its become a land mine
So let me start over
And leave the past behind

Why do when I fall for you
I loose my ability to think
I wish that my past
Wasn't written in ink
When I'm around you
Nothing is in sync

I do it all wrong
Can I do something right
Can I stop stumbling
So I can win this fight
I'd so anything to change it
Even if it takes all night


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  • Static.
    June 27, 2008

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    wow. this flowed really well. i really liked it. i hope it doesnt reflect how you're feeling though cause you are so not a disappointment and anyone who says otherwise will totally have me to deal with...

    love you chick xxxx


    • me alone
      June 27, 2008
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      lol.
      Thanks doll.
      Its not about me feeling like a dissapointment at all.
      It was just lines that popped into my head.
      Many of my poems have nothing to do with me, they are just me writing.