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flowing like the river of the love i spilled for you.

and i heard the sound
FLYING through the air!
please never leave me.
i can't promise you the world.
but here's something--
my heart and all it's worth!

say goodbye to those harmful thoughts you know.
say hello everything that'll help you grow.
because i know
what it takes to make your dreams come true.
you're my world. and i'll always be with you.

and what i hear--
oh no. please no.
why oh why.
[you shouldn't have these feelings for her.]

my sunshine. my angel.
my summer sunset, where the grass is green,
and the trees seem to sing
through the warm wind.

and every time i fall in.

...i fall in love with you.

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i started singing this one day.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    Yes..this is the beauty of the eart in the words of the poetry is dancing around..I love this piece..well done...


  • the.art.of.drowning
    July 5, 2008

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    thats so beautiful. you are very good at poetry. and even lyrics. you must really be in love with someone. good work


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Awwwwwwwwww ^^

    I could sing that ~ I could hear the tune in my head
    Beautiful lyrics
    Yesh, nicely done ^^
    Claire x