Pan

Thunder crackles ...

Change evades lightening vision,
circular sun singes surreal,
burns imprint personable

when duality's cauldron-ed voice
frays delightful mists

mysticism's panoramic echoes ripple.

Author notes

15 to 30 words

Image Credit: Found at photobucket.com

A contest entry

Delightful Evening Quickie by delightfulmess. 450 points, ended June 27, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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kiwigirljacks
June 28

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"duality's cauldron-ed voice" .. I think I know that well!! Awesome write!
Rhyming From Rehab
June 27
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this is wow for me loved it! blessings always~ Trisha
delightfulmess
June 26

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oooooh... very mystical!
Loveing this. Thank you for entering my contest.

Delila
poppa
June 26
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Wonderful write...loving the rich imagery thats prevalent ....good luck
In Too Deep1
June 26

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A grand writ! Beautifully chosen words, resulting in a flawless tale that paces the art of adventure. Loved the imagery and emotion. A most intriguing take on the prompt. Best wishes in the comp
Grey Mouser
June 26

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Wonderful write, fantastic imagery and portrayal of the battle between selves. Best to you.
Mouser
hoodoolover
June 26

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I'm telling you the word choice really does encourage deep thinking...it's great that you can do that with such a short write, bravo!
Stardust-luvr
June 26

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wow awesome write I'm in awe of the imagery your penned words paint within the mind and soul.well done and many blessings always xxx
markgrif
June 26
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Nice dude.

Killer last line.
PerfectImperfection
June 26

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Oooh! Though I was on a similar path - you nailed it!!! Very well penned take on the prompt here. Excellent flow and imagery!
PerfectImperfection
June 26
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? PETER

Good luck in the contest!
- solo wisp
  June 26
  
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  mayhaps Lotsa things rollin' 'round the head here.