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Perception's Reality

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amidst the quiet of question
within one's inner inspection

the quality of sight
tethered upon truth's light

cleanses a soul's reflection

 

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  • ea silver member
    July 6

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    This has merit and I like the rhyme scheme as well though I would fool with it because I'm not sure about the amidst and the within and I also think the of needs to be eliminated in the first line.

    within the quiet question
    of one's inner inspection

    ...

    of course, then you are left with 20 words exactly, which is what this contest called for. I am curious to see how people manage to write effectively with that restriction in mind.


  • Animals
    July 1

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    WOW! Well done you got a bronze trophy. I only have one trophy and it's green!!! Well I'm still learning, and just started poetry at school. I love it! Well done again for your bronze and you truly deserve it!
  • Wanna know why happened when I reached the final word?
    I actually went "Ohhhh" out loud
    Good thing I am home alone right now

    Bravo on a masterpiece
    Congrats on the Bronze

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 27

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    You did such a wonderful job.. I love that picture, and I would say that you did it justice! Congrats on getting the bronze though I think it's worthy of more then that!


    Angel

  • azlyn gold member
    June 27
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    Wonderful take on this...congrats!


    Sue


  • DeGraw
    June 27

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    Just Beautiful!

    What eloquent simplicity!
    Congratulations on your win!
    Would that we all could communicate so effortlessly!
    Regards,
    Jennifer

  • jamiedoring gold member
    June 27

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    Fantastic as usual.

    What you do with words is simply amazing. Congrats on the trophy.

    Jamie

  • beautiful really love this one. congrats to you on the bronze


  • thepoetssoul gold member
    June 27

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    This is a wonderful addition to the contest.
    Your imagery is very vivid in it's brevity
    And the words flow with such ease BRAVO!!!
    Well done and well deserved trophy

    Tony

  • Such a beautiful take on the prompt. Well spoken lines to complement the picture so well. Nicely done!


  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    June 27
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    Congrats on the bronze and on penning a most intriguing and enjoyable writ.

  • How very soothing! Beautifully written about inner reflection that is perfect for that picture!

    Congrats on the bronze hun!

  • congrats dear on the bronze xxx

  • hoodoolover silver member
    June 26

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    This is really a stunning little write, I like the rhyme scheme, and it just seems to fit perfectly for this contest, beautiful!

  • oooh I love this. Great rhyme here
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • solo wisp
    June 26

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    ahhh ... that has a limerick feel to it (unsure if it truly is though, a limerick) .. Great imagery for such a small rhyming piece! Beautiful work!

  • hun you did grand with this and the imagery touches the heart and the last line speaks profoundly. well done and many blessings always xxxx

  • best of wishes babe
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