Distant storm awaits
anticipating integration
as at last the vision is revealed
though long trapped in limpid pool.
Waves of reconciliation churn
as she welcomes home her darkness.
A contest entry
- Delightful Evening Quickie by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Luke come to the dark side. yes, we all have a dark streak, and how better to reflect on it than in this script. congrats on the gold charm. Oh, and may the force be with u.
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You did a wonderful job!!! The emotion and imagery were just so vivid and heartfelt!! You more then deserved that Gold trophry!!!
Angel
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thanks very much
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very lovely, beautiful take on the prompt. Congrats on the gold
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Wonderfully vivid in it's spendid brevity
An exellent creation full of imagery
Well done and well deserved on the Gold.
Tony
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Oooh very nice!!! An excellent take on the prompt here - well deserving of the golden shiny!!!
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Congrats on a well deserved gold
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*dies* heh Golden Congrats!
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it is a shocker, thanks!
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Simply beautiful. A wonderfully dark writ that explains anticipation. I loved the story line and flow, as well as the imagery. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Wow ...great take on the prompt....love it ..the thought of welcoming darkness ..good luck
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oooh... love this...
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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ohhhh ... welcoming home the dark side! waves of reconciliation churn ... smooth ... limpid pool ... another fabulous entry! Beautiful control of vocab and imagery!
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oh no, it's the annihilator! *shudders*
Good Luck!
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