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going out of my head




There lives in me a furious famine; feasting

on thoughts of you.

 

They roll around & dance in my head; I hear

beautiful music. Close my eyes & exhale

heavy sighs...

 

& I'm going out of my mind wishing

you were here.

 

That I could listen to the beat of chest;

hold you close to my breasts.

 

Where are you tonight? Is she comfortable?

 

Does she do to you the things that I would do;

& does she know how to touch you?

 

Here I am. Naked & waiting to give you

the best of me; & I know that you

are naked too

 

 

just not with me & I'm going out of my mind

wishing I wasn't your fool.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 25
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    This would drive me crzy also! Well composed
    an excellent write!

  • Love the imagery, very expressive. This sounds like the inner battle in my mind. Great choice of words by the way, just adds to the feeling that I can relate to so well.