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In my eyes

Change the color in my eyes
Make me new
Sorrow, take it
piece by piece
flow right through me
Know who I am
Change the color in my eyes

This is what you put me through
Take a piece of me
leave me to remain
This is it

Change the color in my eyes
Make me new
Sorrow, take it
piece by piece
flow right through me
Know who I am
Change the color in my eyes

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  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    October 6

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    It does flow well and has good emotional content, but it does suffer from repetition that I think is unneeded. I think you could make it where the last stanza is different, and it still fit. But that's just my opinion.


  • DreamerOfTheStars
    July 1
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    Awwww I like it it flows and it is a moving piece...Love you tons!!!