Eyes closed
ears alert…
I’m sorry friend
that you got hurt.
Nature will prevail.
I can’t resist a
twitching tail!
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Author Unknown (Photobucket)
20 words
A contest entry
- 10/20 QUICKIE! by Sweet Impatience.
725 points, ended June 28, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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cute...cute...cute...love them kitties
congrats to you on the silver
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ha ha funny nature always prevails somehow but it must be hard for nature to prevail as it is us to prevail sometimes a great takeon the promt I enjoyed the last stanza Nature will prevail.I can’t resist a twitching tail! good luck in the contest
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Hahaha!
I have two miniature Dachshunds, a dapple female about 5 pounds and a red male about 8 pounds. They tear around the house (they're still puppies) and sometimes hurt each other, so this poem really made me laugh! I've yet to write poem about them.Great write!
Good luck in the contest!
Regards,
Jennifer
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this is an excellent poem.. and I don't say this very often.. but I can't resist any longer. its so CUTE!!!! ")
the rhyme is flawless and I really enjoyed this poem a lot. excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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Well, as a Kat, I guess you're entitled
...Glad you enjoyed it...
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aaawww this is sweet. so cute!
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Enough of the sweet and cute, already It's enough to make me go back to dark and macabre
Thank you for the nice comment, however... I do appreciate it...
Ken
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Awww!!!! this was just so cute!!! and so sweet as well.. You did a great job with that picture of cuteness!!! lol.. Best of luck!!
Angel
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I usually do sweet and cute under a pen name... I do have a reputation to uphold, you know But thank you for taking the time to read and comment... you're cute and sweet too...
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