He tells me I'm bad
said I should be ashamed
mommy, mommy
He keeps hurting me
He keeps calling me insane
He keeps poking me with sharp sticks
he keeps telling me I'M FUCKING SICK
now even my shadow has left me alone
and all my imaginary friends are gone
mommy He's being so mean
I don't know why the red rabbit likes it when I scream
He tells me He likes the taste of virgin
He says He goes inside me to give me redemption
He reaches really deep inside me
He says to redeem my purity
He says I'm a holy whore
so He goes inside even furthermore
mommy, He makes my insides bleed
I wish you could've helped but now He has hushed my screams
A contest entry
- Heavens Leftovers by Arkbear.
550 points, ended July 22, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you ever felt like this?
Comments
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Well done on winning gold! You really deserved it with this. It was great and inspiring. I hope that your words touch others as they have me.
Well done and keep writing,
Swim.x
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I can not crituqe this.......my heart is touched deeply by your words and thoughts.......thank you for using that powerful quill of yours to show how tender a heart can be, and how sacred a soul is ~
Tremendous work........another great entry.....this will be hard to judge......good luck and God bless you!
Bear ~
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Wicked, dark, sad write.
Best wishes in the contest!
write on and on...
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wow this is a powerful piece and very strong indeed i like it but it was so
had so much emotion to it but it was great thanks for sharing
<3<3
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