Oh to walk with you on the warm beach at sunset
Feeling the cool breeze waft in from the ocean
The touch of your hand on mine
sends a spark of energy flowing all through our bodies
Alone at last with no distractions
No phones ringing or doorbells to answer
Just the two of us on our own private tropical beach
Laughing and playing in the surf we feel so young
We remove all our clothes lying on the packed sand
while wave after wave after wave washes over us
Making love like "From Here to Eternity" on the shore
Feeling a contentment like never before
We arrange palm branches on a spot near the shore line
covering them with blankets as we have decided to sleep there
Dining on fresh fruits and nuts we sit as the sun goes down
Talking in soft tones we rehash our wonderful day
Thinking how great it will be to do it all over again tomorrow
We have the whole week-end together here just you and I
the best part being it is only Friday night
And nothing more needs to be said
In a list
A contest entry
- Romantic Fantasy by ennovy.
700 points, ended July 8, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah, but Sgt. Warden and Mrs. Holmes would have been jealous of your peace and guiltless pleasure.
The last two lines are great, an ending that speaks of the beginning of more to come.
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Very romantic beach fantasy, I could use a weekend like that. Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
Novy & Brazos
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