My life
Is shadow
Under light
A contest entry
- Quickie by chore2chore.
370 points, ended June 26, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is great, in six little words, it can describe so much to so many people. it really accounts in my life and it is a great.
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Ok first and foremost short sweet and to the point i loved it and not just because it wasnt long, but because it spoke to me. I'm not very good at poetry myself, but I love to come on this site and see refreshing work like this absolutely spectacular. I have a way of reading good poetry more then I have a way of writing it. Its a gift I guess lol. Keep up the great write and I will keep on checking out your poetry. ........: at yourself on the back::
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We are all shadows of life...you have captured much with little words..lovely! Thanks for sharing
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This poem is the size of a tic tac. lol.
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Shadow
My life
Is shadow
Under light
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Great little poem.
nice lines...
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wow. this says more in six words than i could ever say in 100. i love how it made me feel, even though it was less than even a thought. this was beautiful.
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I am sorry my friend, please never feel that way.
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