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When darkness absorbs your decency


When darkness absorbs your decency
leaving your body soulless, with an open vacancy,
emptiness covers your once amiable face
leaving of its benignity no trace.

When your hands covered of blood,
take another innocent life with an asphyxiating hug,
the clouds cry tears of rain,
goodness becomes insane.

But forgiveness is not discriminating,
its unavoidably determining,
to one day purify your blackened soul,
reduced to a piece of coal.  

Confess your horrifying sins of despair,
and turn away from the demons lair,
so that one day your penitentiary chains 

 are broken and you'll be free from all restrains.

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  • elmundopasa1
    July 4, 2008
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    a little darker than what i was looking for. but very well done. :-)


  • Lexie
    June 27, 2008

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    i like this poem an awful lot. but i have to say, my favorite part of this wonderful would have to be the title. When darkness absorbs your decency. it just sucks you right in. it makes you want to read the poem. loved it sooo much. great great job.


  • darkheart76
    June 26, 2008
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    great

    loved it