understanding hands
foreign fingers
translate
mixed messages
braille shivers
blind surrender
A contest entry
- Bedroom Eyes by zochit2me.
900 points, ended July 15, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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blinded by the light...revved up like a deuce.... LOVE LOVE THIS. made me tingle... very into the images i got from this. you do short sensual so splendidly well. i'd like this cross-stiched and framed...hanging over my headboard.... lost in darkness..hands and fingers...whispering breath...woohoo. EXCELLENT


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Your comments bring
a wider smile to my face
than most of the poetry on here...
Thanks.
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