In the day before knowledge
There came a time of the visitors
They came from far away
And they came here to stay
They brought all their tools
To teach these simple fools
The ones here learned in time
To conceive with their mind
They began to build steps on a plane
To where the visitor came …
Now they are we who fly into space
Still looking for the visitors place
Author notes
by: jogn
A contest entry
- Will Someone Please Impress Me? by anon053641.
625 points, ended June 27, 2008, 12 entries
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Do you believe
Comments
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It seems like a passage through time, i can see the ships landing and the "visitors" coming down to teach the natives. Who only in their absence grow to seek them out, i enjoyed it thoroughly.
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I like outer space and stuff, I think this really explains the theory well and clear, I enjoyed this a lot.
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i like the simplisicty of this and have often pondered the concept....
well done
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