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My loose Tooth

As a kid I loved eating apples

My tooth got loose from eating one

My tooth fell out into the apple

My bloody tooth still there I ran

To my daddy who placed it under my pillow

The next day I woke up to find a dollar

What a lucky girl am I

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  • LadyOfFate
    August 6, 2008

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    a dollar you say? man losing teeth hurts sometimes. remember I told you about the time I lost one of mine by running into a pole. I can admit I never did and never will know what it is like to lose a tooth in or on an apple.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    This is really cute I rememebr losing my teeth in apples great poem goodluck much love always


  • PinkPony
    June 26, 2008

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    Awww... Sweet memories!

    A precious poem about losing your cute 'lil tooth! I love the cuteness of it and how happy your memory is.