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Desire No More

So sweet but so cold my desire for you
So out of reach that heat of yours, leaving me cold
My desire for you is cooling down, my heart is starting to freeze up
My heart is freezing without your heat consuming me
So sweet but so cold, my desire for you is without your touch
Driving me insane
I miss the burn, I miss the heat of your touch
The burn is gone along with your touch
The heat is gone along with the warm of my body
You have become so cold, your body no longer burns, your eyes no longer light up
So sweet but so cold my desire for you has become
The burn is gone, your gone, my desire for you is gone

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  • Terry Collett
    September 15
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    Very good.

    A moving and honest poem."your" gone, maybe ought to be "you're" gone. anyways, very good.

  • this is a very good poem, i like it alot,
    it shows real strengh, all my love,
    kitty xx