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I lost my tooth

I lost my tooth
while I was eating a popcicle
and took it in to my mommy
she put it in a glass of water
and gave it back to me
before I went to bed
I stuck it under my pillow
and when I woke up
I had five dollars
because it was a
very important tooth
and she really wanted it
for her collection

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  • Iloveugh
    July 28

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    Short and sweet i liked it alot. I love the way it tells about how you lost your tooth and so on. Amazing job.Great and wonderful write. ..<3.. Shelly

  • Maaia
    July 10

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    Awh Gengens, losing teeth is fun! Until you have to get a mean old dentist to pull one out like me!
    Great poem gengens!
    Speak soon!
    Miss you sweets.
    xxxx

  • my.stars.dont.shine gold member
    July 5

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    five dollars for a tooth?! thats fantastic! it must have been a super duper important one! sweet write indeed. loosing teeth was always fun; unless it hurt when you pulled them out. ouch. =]

    i miss you. and great write!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    June 27

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    WOW!!!! Five dollars!!! You sure are lucky sweetheart. Lose another tooth maybe you'll receive 5 thousand dollars. Anyway great poem. I love it. Thanks for sharing and I love you very much. Your Daddy
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    June 27

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    hehe this is such a cute write gen I remember when I lost my first tooth, the gingerbread man stole it and took it into my tummy with him, I think he wanted to keep it instead of giving it to the tooth fairy, So I had to write a letter to the tooth fairy to explain the gingerbread man took it, she left me sme money still hehe

  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 26

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    awww, she was right to give you that much, because you are worth sooo much *hugs* love you sweetie
    and this is beautiful,
    wonderful write and good luck
    miss you
    stephanie


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 26

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    Wow! My teeth were only worth a quarter inflation!
    I still have my sons baby teeth. Hope your new tooth is strong and lasts you a lifetime Congratulations on a wonderful poem.


  • Chrysalis
    June 26

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    5 dollars from the tooth fairy...
    not to flowing, but still you got your points and thoughts across, and that's what is really important. Luck in the contest.
    blessed be
    -BLanche

  • PinkPony
    June 26

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    Oh, what a wonderful Tooth Fairy!

    The Tooth Fairy must have taken your tooth and put it up in the Land of Enchantment for all the other fairies to admire! What a darling poem you have written, dear 'lil poet!


  • Hope Angel
    June 26

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    hehe girlie! I remeber loosing teeth. This was such a fun poem. Your poetry always makes me smile.
    I miss you sweetie! I love you loads and good luck


  • slick99
    June 26

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    awwww. i remember losing my first tooth, and i got five bucks!!!! good job Sunshine Princess. -slick99


  • bryansgirl04
    June 26
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    awww

    this poem is so sweet and so right


  • Midnight-x-Rose
    June 26

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    I remember when one of my teeth came out on a school trip, it was very scary... I was around 9 as well and it bled quite a bit and was sore afterwards and the weird feeling of having a gap in your teeth was strange. Beautifully put sweetie and glad to hear the tooth fairy took your important tooth and gave you a reward for it

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