You said
the most destructive
words in all of mankind,
you said:
I love you
Author notes
Fifteen words?
You got em.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXIII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 30, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Fifteen
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing the word: Beautiful - in regards to this piece also after reading I was being shown images of flowers- hearing reference to daisies however- it was like the petals pulled- love me; love me not type of situation~
Also being shown a gavel as if in a People's Court for some reason and also reference to ice cream melting which feels like a metaphor or symbolism- possibly for a heart melting by words said
Hopefully this makes some sense
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Powerful message and images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...I love you
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Wow, thank you so much!
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Haha, oh yes this is absolutely true. I said the words and had to find out for myself how truly destructive they can be...
Maybe someday they wont be so destructive?
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Hope so
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Dang....BAM!!! Good effort placed with these words...Aren't they so destructive!?
Best wishes,
Kristy
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Thank you
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you are welcome
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