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Blinded In Pursuit Of Riches.

Silent strains sweep softly the soil

in haunting waves, piercing the air.

Starving souls succumb to society's selfishness,

too spiritless to deny dominions demands.

Dry earth cracks, becoming the casket,

of grasping hands plying devils desires.

For sadly, minds pursuing prosperity

display careless comprehension

of the true treasure that is humanity.

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Prompt - 2. Coffer coffin

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  • PhantomsAngel87 gold member
    June 27
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    Captivating from beginning to end!
    Congrats on the Silver


  • penman gold member
    June 27
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Darkwell silver member
    June 27

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    this flowed so good i could read it in one roll. wow youre really awesome with words

    Dry earth cracks, becoming the casket,
    of grasping hands plying devils desires.

    this just blew me away