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Love is just hate spelled differently.

Spill my blood over this floor.
This is how I make the pain go away.
Please just let me bleed.
No one will understand this pain.
The pain of being alone.
My heart is gone.
I love no more.
You kill me inside and out.
You'll never stop untill this pain kills me.
What are your intentinos?
To make me love no more?
To make me bleed out?
To make me spill the blood from my wrists?
You kill me.
You'll never stop till I am gone.
A lost soul from the world.
Suicide all over the TV.
Girl dies.
Case 1:
In my forecast I see death cause by....
Some slow Meds and a knife.
Now lets look over the body.
A slit to the thoart and some to the wrists.
Helped by the meds of course.
Blood stained carpet.Now the muder weapons are pretty much clear.
One that worked the most you say?
Well that would be the heart break.
The girf and depression helped some too.
Drowned in all this.
A heart that once wasn't dead.
That was once beating.
But she decided to say goodnight.
End of case 1.
Now im gone and its all your fault!
 Case 2:
A gun taken to the head after a fight.
Many unwanted words said I would think.
He'd go running after hearing the gun shot
Running from what he did.
His name cravred on the bullet.
Friends and family come around and mope.
Death by a lover who didn't love.
Oh that is the worst way to go folks.
Lover caused many things in this persons life.
Well look over her prescriptions.
Yes that is what you see.
Pain killers and anit-depressinos.
What are the pain killers for?
Maybe ever blow to the body.
May I point out the brusies on her body?
Now don't cover your eyes,
This is the real thing.
Lovers that were never meant to be!
Oh what a sad story of wasted love!
Now you see she finally bleed all the love,
she could.
Now because of him she is under this grave.
Friends and family crying for their loss.
Love is just hate spelled differntly.......

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  • broken-angel
    July 12, 2008
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    loved this again... very powerful...u have a talent hun xxx


  • Second.Choice
    July 12, 2008

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    Wow! I loved this poem! Such raw and beautiful emotion. It was so powerful, I really liked the title, it caught my eye straight away. And I loved how you repeated the title in the last verse Great write!
    xx


  • ellaelu
    June 26, 2008
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    thanks for entering..