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Screaming our goodbyes

I am screaming,
The terror slips through the walls,
Yesterday we were laughing,
Now were alone,
Please don't say goodbye,
It doesn't have to end,
Between our friendship,
Not to ever end,
Between you and I,
But leave if you must,
Please be happy,
Just don't SAY goodbye,
My love is burning,
Trying to dry your tears,
I wish I could wrap my arms around you,
So you can't leave me,
In the night,
You know I'm NEVER far,
Black blood replaces you Ice tears,
My promises turn to lies,
My words turn to regrets,
I can't help you,
I can't save you,
I can't be near you,
I know now the painful truth,
I can't protect you,
I can't feel the warmth,
Of you kiss,
I don't want to lie to you,
Please don't you cry,
I am no angel,
Set from heaven,
But I am yours,
I wish I was human,
I can't be there for you,
Don't say your farewell,
Because it's my turn to say goodbye,
I must leave,
You need to stay...

Author notes

This poem was written by Jacob, my friend and Chelsea's too. I told you he loves her, enough to leave her so he won't be a burden for her any more.

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Comments

  • In-the-Darkness
    July 11

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    Depressing. I had the same feelings at one, two, maybe four times in my life. But I have to disagree with jogn, it flows well and has meaning that comes from the heart. Your frend Jacob is onto something. Bravo.


  • jogn
    July 5
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    I like it

    Doesn't flow well.
    write from your heart not your mind.
    this could be great with a little more thought


  • bryansgirl04
    June 26
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    i feel the same way at times