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Feelings

Feelings I Have For You
My feelings I have for you,
Is more than I can take.
It hurts me and it's true.
When I'm sleeping or awake.
I just cannot define,
The words that will express,
The thoughts I have in mind,
When I lie to rest.
I dream of you at night.
I think of you all day.
I wish with all my might,
That i could find a way,
To be inside your heart.
To hold you night and day.
I hope we never part,
But together we will stay

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    June 26, 2008

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    Great poem :] I can definitely relate. It holds so much meaning and emotion to it;; you definitely have a great talent at rhyming too. Keep writing <3 Best of luck to you =]