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Someone, Take me Away

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Dear someone,

Take me away from this place

because though I keep on running

I havent won the race

I hurt the ones i love

and cry myself to sleep at night

and though I pretend I'm fine

nothing is going right

Please come and save me

take me far away

please beleive I love you

No matter what I do or say 

take these pills from my hand

throw them down the drain

hold me tight, keep me close

and take away my pain

 Curse the ones who hurt me

or make me cry with pain

please someone dont let me

end my life in vain

Creat rainbows before me

and butterflies too

help me feel happy

when I look alittle blue

Kiss my eyes

Kiss my cheek

and help hold me up

when Im feeling weak

Tell me that you love me

and you'll never let me go

Let me know life is great

and you have allot of love to show 

Tell me like it is::

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  • DarkRomantic113
    August 18
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    Flowed like a river. Great writing.


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 17

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    Beautiful! The rhyme is excellent along with the appropriate terminology incorporated. This was vivid with a positive view to life, I really liked this. my favourite lines 'take these pills from my hand

    throw them down the drain'
    Excellent work, just stunning.

    ~Emily~ xx


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 2

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    What a wonderful poem. Truly great and full of emotions. I hope to read more from you. Keep on writing.

  • mrs. random silver member
    June 26

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    Beautiful my sister. Have faith in the Lord, he will bless all of your days

    love ya girlie. hang in there.

    Mylee

  • killshort
    June 26

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    ill I can say to this is I have done everything you have allowed me to do and i want to be the one to make all your troubles go away....if only you give me that last chance
    Melyssa I love you

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