softly tipped fingers trace along hidden collar bone
&& deep lake water eyes stare out in some kind of blank search
lighty chapped lips part slowly as to speak, but close again
leaving you in wonder:: who is she; why
[ are you brave enough to ask ]
Please tell me what you think
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ha, i love this, it's a great kind of self-reflection. i loved "deep lake water eyes".
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Thanks you!!
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hrmmm. wonder who this was about :]
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actually it's about me.
I wonder what people think about me when they see me
or just what they generally think about me.
All the things I want to tell people but can't bring myself to say...ugh. it's so frustrating. I'm afraid of being judged.
and I wonder what people wonder about me...
and why they don't just ask.
lol...yeah i was in a mood when I wrote this. -
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im like that ALL the time too.
I'm sure they say, "wow she's awesome, I'd like to get to know her" =]
i know i would. -
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^_^ awe. thanks.
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i loved the imagery conveyed in this piece. it was terrific
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Thank you.
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[ are you brave enough to ask ]
it makes me sad to know that i'm not brave enough to even ask about anything anymore.
everything i've ever wanted to say gets stuck in my throat and i choke on it.
and i love this poem.
it reminds me of her.
then again, everything does.
you've got talent, i mean it.
'softly tipped fingers trace along hidden collar bone'
i have no critique for this. it seems perfect to me.
you've made me cry.
i'm happy i've stumbled across this.
i have a new favorite.
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I'm glad you like it.
I'm gald someone can relate to this too.
I feel this way quite often.
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