Arms
opened
now;
at
last
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I finally feel like I am willing to open up to my friends and the world. I am willing now to explain myself and take what I am given. It feels good.
A contest entry
- Tell me how you feel in Five words or Less by luna-midnight.
555 points, ended June 28, 2008, 80 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment honestly please. But don't be rude. CONSTRUCTIVE CRISTISM is welcome. But don't bash me; I work hard.
Comments
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I wish I could find the strength to let a world into mine, so well penned even in such short form. Best to you dear Bandit.
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Wow, thats a cool poem. its strong, short and just there... It grabbed me and held me, even tho arms are open
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Aww. This is sweet. Short, but sweet.
Good luck with the world thing...really!
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*hugs*
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I know that feeling. It takes a lot of effort to do that but when you do, it is quite rewarding
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Oooo everyone seems to be entering this contest! Maybe I should too
Awesome write in such few words, and I ish happy for you
Claire x -
awwww thats wonderful *hugs* im so happy for you, i hope it still feels good and stays good
these are wonderful words
take care and good luck
stephanie
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wut
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No one asked you Blackie... Be nice... I'll attack you.
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I wasn't being mean though.
Teasing, yes, but that's not being mean.
Also, your attacks don't scare me.
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Lies! Lies!
It's still mean. Rawr on you.
Oh but they should. I am an expert pear killer.
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Nah, if I was being mean, you'd know it.
Pfft, I fear nothing.
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Well, maybe I know it right now! Ha!
Well, you should fear me...
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No you don't.
And why is that? -
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Yes! Yes! I do.
Um.... Because you should!
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But why?
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