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The Evil Goat At The Zoo

all i wanted to was go the zoo
maybe even bet a goat or two

there so cute and fuzzy
makes such a cute noise
to pet a goat
would be heaven oh joy!

so i went over the stable,
where the goats stay
its my party, i turn 5 today

i open the gate and say hello
there stand a goat, a cute little fellow

i reach my hand out to pet the goat
but that little devil, try to attack my throat

i ran and my hands flailing behind
the evil goat chomp my hand oh my!

i cried and cried
mommy telling me to stop
that the goat was just hungry
that why he took a chomp

but deep deep down i know the truth
you look in the goats eyes
and you will see it too

the goat wants to kill me
im perfect bait
that evil little goat is just waiting for the day

that day will not happen
no it will not
for ill never see i goat again
no i will not,

im staying away for the rest of my life

no way im getting close

to the zoo's wildlife

Author notes

i choose #6
also about lauren and her fear of goats

A contest entry

do i have the rhyming thing down

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  • AutumnsFlame
    July 23

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    HAHAHAH... nice... This made me laugh. I think you could've used more imagery since this was more like a story than a poem, but good job. It wasn't bad. Thank you for entering my contest.
  • Very cute poem, made me giggle. But I wasn't a fan of the off grammar, I think it distracts from reading when you notice something is off. But overall, I really like it.
  • Ah, I have to face goats tomorrow don't I?... Oh well, for you I will see goats, best of luck hun. This was cute and funny.