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My Knight

Someday,
I'm going to
See your smilin' face
Looking back at me
But maybe that's
just my dreams
Yeah...
Shining Knight
come and find me
take me away
from all my worries.
Hey, Knight,
I don't care
If you got a bad side
Or grew up in the dark.
You can be
as evil
as they come
as long
as you love me.
You could be my vampire
with your fangs
lingering at my neck
waiting for the sweetness
of my bloody froth.
BE my werewolf
with little fits
of uncontrolled anger.
Yo, Knight,
wouldn't it be nice
if we took a stroll
in the moonlight
by a river
flowing away.
Hey, you,
wouldn't it be great
if we could get together
and like have a little dinner.
Be my vampire;
Be my werewolf;
Be my Dark Knight
born under starlight.
Someday,
I'm going to
see your smilin' face
looking back at me,
but maybe that's
just apart of my dreams.
Shining Knight,
come and find me.
I could be your food
for your blood thirsty fangs,
or the puppy
running beside you
as your wolf
takes hold.
I want to
be the antidote
to your poison.
Come and find me
before I drown
in my own misery.

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  • Alt
    June 27, 2008
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    very good poem


    • DancingRain1692
      June 27, 2008
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      thanks


      • Alt
        June 29, 2008
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        ur welcome hun

        • DancingRain1692
          June 30, 2008
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          ^_^..... i made an amv on my youtube site... it is my first one you should tell me wad ya think......PLZ.... or i will shed big tears....lolz


          • Alt
            July 6, 2008
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            lol I will go and check it out lol

            • DancingRain1692
              October 10, 2008
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              AMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

              I'm COMING HOME SOON!!!!!!!!!!....... i was kicked out of the army because.... i have asthma.... i didnt know i had that.... wow.... i have way to many medicial shit wrong with me

              • Alt
                October 12, 2008
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                YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't seen u in like forever or talked to u on the phone. when u get home u will have to call me. I missed u. how was the army? I love ya

                • DancingRain1692
                  October 12, 2008
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                  lolz

                  the army was great.... until they ran some test cause i stopped breathing every time we went for a run.... lolz... the testing said that i have really bad asthma....it happens.... ill be home tuesday night.... i might stay with the grands when i come home or i might be going home to platte cause i need to be there for shelby.....so idk... you might be able to see me soon.... kools...... love you and Scouts Out!

                  • Alt
                    October 13, 2008
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                    well that is not good that u stopped brething. whats
                    wrong with shelby. she ok? I hope I get to see u
                    soon. I haven't seen u or talked to u in like forever.
                    I hope everything is going ok. I love ya and peace. lol

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