Darling, your eyes are filled with stars
That light my way through the darkest nights
This fire that you've kindled in my heart
Makes all of the world's torments seem alright
I adore the way you always kiss my lips
Your sweet flavor lingers on my tongue
And the gracing touch of your fingertips
Who really cares if we two are still young?
I wouldn't leave you even to save the world
And I wouldn't leave despite all that they say
You're worth it all, I'll always be your girl
And you can count on me to be there every day
Author notes
58) a love poem without the word love in it
So what! I don't know everything
A contest entry
- Question here, A riddle there, who knows what I am thinking by LadyOfFate.
450 points, ended July 11, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes... this I like... Love to the bitter end.
Young love, young heart
No matter what they say
Two silly people in love
Dare the world,
Risk anything
Because LOVE is the name.
Summer51
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what a touching love poem. very sweet indeed, and wonderfully written! I enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing
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Wonderful!!! This is very romantic, powerful! You did a great job on this piece!
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i really liek this
and i can relate
very powerful stuff
that i think many people face...
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Very romantic. And not very cliche like most love poems are. Well done
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very nicely done. good work. good luck in the contest
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