I can’t explain my own tears
There just filled with unexplained fears
Thoughts are filling my head with hopes and dreams
Pouring out of my eyes like little streams
Why can’t I just make my head clear
I don’t know if it’s out of love or fear
Something in my mind just isn't right
I'm sick of trying my hardest to be plight
The real me is just stuck inside my head
Letting you in is something i still dread
You couldn’t handle the thoughts i feel
I feel bad because with me you are so real
I want to open my heart and soul to you
But I’m afraid on what you will do
Dreams show me happy yet alone
Because with me nothing is left unshown
I can't explain my own tears
There just filled with unexplained fears
Please tell me what you think
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A bit frightening...
I wonder what this could actually be refering to, some frightening ideas come to mind, but I hope they are totally false. I hope one of these days we chat, you'll explain this more.... I really liked it. It told me how like me, there is more to you than meets the eye. I am so very glad I know you Sam, every time we talk, I can smile that much easier.
Love you,
Alex
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Very good!!!! One thing though, on the 5th to last line it may sound better if you put "of" what you will do, instead of "on". Just my opinion!
~DAWN~
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Wow thanks umm thanks for the opinion on that line i agree it would be better but i like to leave my poetry the way i wrote them.Thats just the way i have always done things other than spelling check thats all the changes i make i think it keeps more meaning behind my poetry. Thank you so much for the comment im happy you liked it.
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