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~The Stream Of Happiness~.

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When feeling lost,so sad and blue,
listen to your Angel's voice so true.
When life feels no longer calm,
She will always bless you,with Angel Balm.

When you seek happiness,but only find pain,
her feathers of comfort,will sustain.

Just open the doorway,your heart to her Rainbows light,
She will be your sunshine,your colourful halo,bright.
Remember the stream of happiness is found at Rainbows End,
so bathe in the joyfulness,that your Angel will send.




© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)



Hello dear poet,
Thanking you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and review is greatly valued. I appreciate your thoughts dearly.
I hope you enjoyed the read.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Your friend in poetry.
~Angel~




Author notes

I have chosen "Laments in the stream of happiness"

Credit for the background goes to Madman. He has designed many backgrounds for me.He is very artistically talented, not only with his designs, but also with his poetry, check him out, you wont be disappointed!

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    June 27

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    Beautiful

    A most beautiful composition enwrapped within beautiful artistry!! Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      June 28
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      BuriedTreasures


      Hello Sweet Friend,Blessings to you.
      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment on my poem and also for your applause.Your thoughts on my work are always appreciated. I value your time and review on my writes.
      Take care and much love to you and your loved ones.
      Your friend in poetry,
      ~Angel~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    June 27

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    Very nicely worded and written. Very sensual, we all need a Angel to keep our spirits up. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      June 28
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      ckwriter69

      Hi charley Thanks so much Hun for your comment on my poem.Your thoughts on my work mean the world to me,I appreciate your loyalty very much.A big hug also for leaving your applause.
      blessings to you sweet one.
      Your Friendly Angel in poetry,
      ~Angel~