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Prepare for the war,
The battle will begin.
Prepare for the war,
the demons are rising.
Hold your magic,
focus your mind,
focus your body,
watch their moves,
learn and devise,
and finally make your move.
Make your move..
Angry voices,
hard choices,
but all for their demise.
Look your enemy in the eye.
You are brave beyond their belief;
Prepare yourself, for the battle is here..
Release you lightning and fire,
hurt them and feel their pain,
show them who is this land's rightful sire,
show them what, out of this war, they will gain.
Fire, 'nd air, blind and buuuuurrrnnn! (burn)
Earth, 'nd wind, shake and huuuuuuurrrttt! (hurt)
The war will last long,
so be patient with all that goes on.
Rise with your woven spells,
to imprison them in tiny dreadful cells,
for in this war, you are the Wizard
that will make their lives an eternal Hell!
Embrace the power,
and release the destruction!
Fire, 'nd air, blind and buuuuurrrnnn! (burn)
Earth, 'nd wind, shake and huuuuuuurrrttt! (hurt)
Heart, 'nd fury, make them fleeeeeeee! (flee)
Lightning, 'nd thunder, make them ruuuuuunnnn! (run)
Focus your mind,
feel the earth,
and Fire once agaaaaaiiiiin.
Fire, 'nd air, blind and buuuuurrrnnn! (burn)
Earth, 'nd wind, shake and huuuuuuurrrttt!(hurt)
Heart, 'nd fury, make them fleeeeeeee! (flee)
Lightning, 'nd thunder, make them ruuuuuunnnn! (run)
Make them ruuuuunnnnnn!
Make them fleeeeeee!
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
you can't stop a miracle
Feel free to suggest a title. This lyric is inpsired by the song prompt: Violator by RA. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ae3-EtakW1g )
I'll put in more notes in the morning as to how to imagine the song/the wording with the music
** the first four lines are to be said with the drums in the song two words at a time. Line1 at 0.11, line2 at 0.16, line3 at 0.20, line 4 at 0.25 (almost). The following six lines are said within the frame of 0.26 till 0.40 then "Angry voices" start when the guy starts talking/singing. Stanza 6: "Release your fire" is to be said directly after stanza 5, i only separated them coz they looked odd one rhyming and one not.
I know my rhyming is on and off but I felt there should be a bit, at least with the chorus, which, in turn, has lines ending as such "buuuuuuuurn" and "huuuuuuurt"
Hope you like it and sorry it took so long, let's face it, i always keep stuff till the last minute!!
A contest entry
- let the music set you free by Improv Machinery.
1100 points, ended August 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i can totally hear the tune for this its amazing
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WoW!! I absolutely loved it!the wording feels soo strong and powerful.The rhythm was on and off at times but I never felt bored or anything while reading it.I was all the same reading eagerly
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And yeah it seems true u always keep the good stuff till last minute
lol
Good luck
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wow
i have listened to this song literally hundreds of times and i have never had any kind of thoughts clost to what you have come up with. this write is simply amazing. i absoloutely love how you emphasized some of the words with drawn out spellings. it really added to the feel and overally eotion of the poem. you did a superb job in writing this. never stop writing.
Rob -
the contest closes in a few days, when will you be writing your poem?
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All the best for the best miracle!
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your song is called Violator, by RA, its linked on my page. the site isnt letting me comment with links so this is the best that i can do.
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