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Nature

The Earth moves
people stop that movement
the earth keeps going

She shows her distress
She gives us hurricanes,
tsmanumis, thunderstorms,

and torandos

 

She is trying to set herself

she wants to be the way

she was when she first started

 

 

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lexicats

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  • etoile
    December 12, 2008

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    interesting poem. i like your ideas but i feel like they could be expanded on better ( i generally like longer poems that's why)
    anyways, the ending was creative i liked it.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • hoodoolover silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    Nice approach, and so true, I am sure she is trying to get rid of the scourge that has infested her, thanks for entering!