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Dance

Moving through the shadows
Searching for the light of day
Among the golden meadows

My dance is quick
And much like play
Through the trees so thick

The sun is rising
And I must go
Which shouldn't be surprising.

I will return again
When the moon does glow
And you will see me then

Author notes

sorry It took so long, hope I'm not dqed!

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  • Frodofan
    July 1, 2008

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    No, of course you're nto DQed!

    This is pretty good, though it does have a handful of spelling errors. You should look through it.

    I like the images and the idea here. Thanks for entering.