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Realizations in the back seat of a Roller Coaster [Ride.]

She was hiding under heart beats; 
  She was hiding in the holes in his chest.
Listening to the 
  sounds cry
From the broken stereo
  Hidden in her ears.


You watch as the
        Pores from her skin
and the Cells in her body,
  Follow her lead
And hide behind the makeup
(Made up) on her face.

And we watch as I breathe.
Because as I breathe,
The world changes...
    Everything changes,
    And part of it is because of me.

I'm running
  [Like water]
And My molecules are turning into
Liquid. 

My stomach has a monster,
  Chewing apart the
  Butterflies.

And I can feel him climb up my throat,
feasting on the 
  Words that I swallowed.



I can hear you.
  Here.
There.

  I can hear your Dead, Decaying,
  Heart Beat,
 
  And it's like music to my ears.
I can feel the rainstorms of fingerprints
Falling on my body.
  I can hear the rainstorms of I NEED YOU's

Sleeping in their clouds.

 
  I'm the sound inside your chest.
  I'm the pounding in your hipbones.
  I'm the waves beneath your fingertips.
  I'm absolutely nothing but a consistent breath of air.

I'm a billboard for
    Advertising Broken wishes on Falling stars,
And I carry a
    Cluster of Disasters
In my pocket full of Sincerity,
Every where I go.


  The colors of Autumn
Changes to Ashes,
  And they're hanging off my eyelash wishes.
The Sun sleeps in a shade of Forever,
  And if holding on to you meant I'd lose the sun,
(Well, Baby, I'd be nocturnal.)
    Too bad I don't have anymore strength to reach with.




I try to paint myself a comatose
  Of Dreams and Forevers
In the shade of rainbows.
I try to picture perfect
  Thoughts of
Skeleton structures
  Rising with my Imagination.


I try on feelings
  That are so loud,
And don't fit me right,

  So I hide behind words
That I can't spit out,
  (So I just chew up.)



And as you're choking on your own
  Sentiments
I realize.


  ... I'm her.
I'm you.
I'm everything between.
  Because I'm just lungs full of air,
and all I do

  is breathe.

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    July 28, 2008

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    A very Unique and interesting write. =] You write very nicely. It all flowed wonderfully, excellent write


  • swinglifeaway
    July 23, 2008

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    ... I'm her.
    I'm you.
    I'm everything between.
    Because I'm just lungs full of air,
    and all I do

    is breathe.


    i love the way you write, especially the ending - its so well put.

    great write


  • Glitter Scar
    July 23, 2008
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    She was hiding under heart beats;
    She was hiding in the holes in his chest.


    Beautiful.


  • Hell In Harmony
    June 26, 2008

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    She was hiding under heart beats;
    She was hiding in the holes in his chest.
    good intro. I liked it

    I'm running
    [Like water]
    And My molecules are turning into
    Liquid.

    clever!

    I can hear you.
    Here.
    There.

    I can hear your Dead, Decaying,
    Heart Beat,
    And it's like music to my ears.

    I liked the feeling of that,

    I try on feelings
    That are so loud,
    And don't fit me right,

    AMAZING.

    Because I'm just lungs full of air,
    and all I do

    is breath.

    LOVE your ending. thank you for this, its exactly what i wanted
    Kat

    ps; its ok if you dont know , I never do either.


  • aanika
    June 26, 2008
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    beautiful
    but the last word should be "breathe" not "breath"
    unless i'm mistaken.

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