He had such an innocuous nickname,
And such an overwhelming charm.
At the first meeting, he seemed tame,
Great looking, I thought, what possible harm?
We drank, chatted, deep kissing galore,
He embraced me, telling me I was the one;
He took my heart and love, and even more,
His blond thin personage seemed my rising sun.
Oh beautiful young god, dominate me,
Penetrate me, feed me, use me, totally;
I was enraptured, as much as could be,
It took awhile to see underlying futility.
Given his background of theft, jail and troubles,
I decided to disentangled from that hopeless muddle!
Author notes
A sonnet, and a bit edgy, but it really happened. We both ended up splitting it off (thank goodness). Was fun while it lasted.
A contest entry
- Your love is my perfect disaster. by ellaelu.
1000 points, ended July 18, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOL, Love it.. seems like a perfect disaster to me.. great use of imagery. Thank you so much for entering. Best of luck.
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Wow, this is great! An excellent write, and a good decision on your part! I love the images these lines inspire:
"Oh beautiful young god, dominate me,
Penetrate me, feed me, use me, totally;"
Good luck to you in the contest, and thanks for sharing this,
Luck.
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