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Why Cant I?

Why cant I ??
Stop loving you,
Ive tried,
Ive moved on,
To other people,
But my mind,
always goes back to you,
But you have always said,
lets just be friends,
Why cant I ??
Stop looking at you,
Your eyes,
so icy blue ,
I saw them today,
In the sun,
when you were writing down,
what ever we were doing,
In a stupid buckle down,
Why cant I ??
Stop thinking of you,
My daydreams,
My dreams when I sleep,
And sometimes just thinking,
of normal things,
Why cant I ??
Just stop,
Thinking of you,
Looking at you,
dreaming of you,
its because,
Im in love with you

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  • ellaelu
    June 26, 2008

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    Great job. I too have been stuck on someone. Going on 17 years now...sometimes the one we love is the worst thing for us. Sounds like you have your own little perfect disaster.Guard your heart well.


  • Luckintheshadows
    June 26, 2008

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    Wow, I can so relate to this! the emotion pours off the page like a tidal wave of love/obsession/love...just wow! and excellent write,

    good luck to you in the contest, and thanks for sharing this,

    Luck.