Gonna go crazy,
I see all the
sign posts up ahead,
sanity is behind me
in an ever disapearing
veil-
Wax eyed and
slack to the
pains of this world
heart broken
beyond the
mechanical means
of repair-
Walk through theses
stupors
of painful
missteps,wrong turns
and lost voyages
to shuffle
zombie like
in a sacreligious
show of living-
Author notes
written in dec.07
A contest entry
- anything 101 by Virgoan.
900 points, ended July 12, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Bravo! Standing Ohhhhhvation!
Bookmarked. I adore that "wax eyed" line... wonderful. Did I mention that I thought this rocks?
This rocks!
Kj

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well thanks!
glad you liked..
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I can relate very much to these words... but I believe you know that already.
well spoken, of course.
at least one of us is able to write it out.


♥

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ehh. sorta of....I think it is still stuck in there sometimes,,but then again, it could just be a wrong sign,,,



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all you can do is keep walking and hope that in the end you find where you are going, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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