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Detour

Gonna go crazy,
I see all the
sign posts up ahead,
sanity is behind me
in an ever disapearing
veil-

Wax eyed and
slack to the
pains of this world
heart broken
beyond the
mechanical means
of repair-

Walk through theses
stupors
of painful
missteps,wrong turns
and lost voyages
to shuffle
zombie like
in a sacreligious
show of living-

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written in dec.07

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  • Akimbo silver member
    July 8

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    Bravo! Standing Ohhhhhvation!

    Bookmarked. I adore that "wax eyed" line... wonderful. Did I mention that I thought this rocks?
    This rocks!
    Kj


  • LionessK Greeters member
    June 28

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    I can relate very much to these words... but I believe you know that already.
    well spoken, of course.
    at least one of us is able to write it out.



    • greyhaime silver member
      June 29
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      ehh. sorta of....I think it is still stuck in there sometimes,,but then again, it could just be a wrong sign,,,

  • all you can do is keep walking and hope that in the end you find where you are going, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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