The door jamb clicks as I hear you enter the room
-anticipation grows.
Your lover for the day has started dropping his clothes
-I eagerly await.
You close all the blinds and draw the curtain on the two way mirror
-my pulse begins to race.
He thinks you like to watch yourself as he notices the reflective surfaces
-little does he know.
Behind the mirror he flexes in front of I sit and watch
-hands in my lap.
This works well for you and I, the voyeur and exhibitionist
-bedroom eyes are watching.
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A contest entry
- Bedroom Eyes by zochit2me.
900 points, ended July 15, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Ooh lala very scintilating and sensualy full of suggestion. I like what you've done with the prompt!
Excellent piece!!
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It was stated to go out side the box and try to not be to obvious with "bedroom eyes" so I went with the only other choice for me.
Thanks sweetie
Cheryl
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