I'm just
An after thought
Author notes
It would be nice
just occasionally
to come first in someones life
A contest entry
- Tell me how you feel in Five words or Less by luna-midnight.
555 points, ended June 28, 2008, 80 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I actually really liked the words in your author notes better than the ones in the contest. Anyways congratulations on bronze.
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Ouch! I really hear the ache in these words! Well written.
Congratulations on the bronze.
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This was really wonderful.. I can relate to this five little words.. you did a great job.. Congrats on the bronze..
Angel
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Powerfully said - just make sure that you are first in your own life... the others can follow. Congratulations on the bronze.
Marlene -
Whoa!
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Awww...
you will be the first and only thing in someones life...life is waiting for you!
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I agree with Adora, love yourself first ~ in any case you'll be number one in /someones/ life and you'll feel good about it
(win win situation ^^)
If not, I hope that you will become someones number one soon
Good luck with your entry
Claire x -
Love yourself, come first with yourself, take care of yourself, love other people sweetie and other people will become infected. Cheers!
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awww *hugs* really like this, its very powerful and yet so sad, i know the feeling, it hurts soo much, and you know i bet you are first in someones life, but maybe you just dont know it yet *hugs* i hope things get better soon and take care
stephnaie
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Aww You aways come first with me babe
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