My soul is a rainbow
of lives lived in the past
with each incarnation
a new color cast.
My life is a rainbow
the sum of the whole
and integrally connected
to my very old soul.
My love is a rainbow
of emotions I share
a breath taking bliss
you can feel in the air.
The universe is a rainbow
of Gods grand scheme
filtering down into all
who envision his dream.
Author notes
WWildBill
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A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a great poem.
Keep up the great writing.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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This is really lovely 'WWildBill' - such wonderful wording and images. I was trying to pick my favorite line or verse - but just can't. This all goes so well together.
(and yes, judging these entries and trying to pick the top 3 - will be a big headache!!)
Thank you for this lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest
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Wow Bill....
Boomer's going to have a hard time judging this one...
don't forget to put the credit to the picture and you username in the AN!!!
Best wishes in the contest...
write on!
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nice thoughts and rhymes, positive thoughts.
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A really pretty poem. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Slayer -
Nicely written
the colors of the rainbow shows so many emotions
and imagery
Best wishes
Julie
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This is sweet reading.♥ ♥
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Ooooh...I really like this! I like how you talk about "my soul", "my life", "My love", and then, "The universe" I was trying to pick one part that I like more than others...but I can't...it's all good! I'm glad I read this! ***Pam***
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Thank you for the wonderful comment I'm really glad you liked it
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VERY BEAUTIFUL WRITE
VERY NICE RHYME
EXCELLENT
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY
PLEASE DON'T REPLY TO MY COMMENT
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GOD BLESS...
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