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God

God has blessed me sweetly,
giving me peace and love.
Grace and mercy are mine,
granted by His kindness.
Gone are days of blunder,
given is forgiveness.
God has blessed me sweetly.
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  • ShelleyA gold member
    July 6

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    A very good write. Heartfelt. Lovely depth of feeling and expression of faith. Very nice use of repetition. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. A much enjoyed read.


  • Pimpindelight gold member
    July 1

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    Tis an exellent form that you have given beauty and power tooWonderfully weaved in it's exellent brevityThanks for sharing your talent.

    Tony


  • Candy6
    June 29
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    Very good. This is a different style.

  • bobbyjo
    June 27

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    vary good

    i liked it
    vary good it is nice to know there are still people who beleven in god

    cierra


  • Samplette gold member
    June 26

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    Another well written pleiades. Very nicely done. Again, the subject is right up my alley. Very inspirational and encouraging.
    Sam

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