My slates were broken
rain was seaping in
Foundations were weak
I could feel it within
dampness around
to darkness i was bound
you lit a small flame
and with it lit my life
Patched my foundations
when i became your wife
Fixed new slates to stop the rain
and i could once again
feel secure
and my heart began to start
Its soft rhythm it once had
The beating regained life
and my house was once again whole
with you inside
sheltering me from the cold and rain
you helped me regain my strength
Author notes
You helped me just by returning my love !
Loving you forever and ever and my heart will never stop beating for you, for you return the beats
love ye dom boy!
A contest entry
- where HE lives... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 10, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
ya cheesy softy, naw im jokin, thants lovely doll, xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxxo
it was written well too, structured with having nio commas and having a swiftness in it, like a flowing stream...or something?...loves doll, xoxoxoxoxox
-
-
it was written a wile ago.... (26th June)
*IMAGINE**
a-ha.. anno cheesiness a me hi
thanks pet..xxxx
-
-
Ah..what a touching piece you brought my friend..I love this piece..this has the meaning of life in it..well done...
-
-
THank you very much for your lovely comment
i'm glad you enjoyed the piece that i wrote
lisa
-
-
what a sweet poem::: written for whom you love. thank you for sharing with us. LOVE, prettypoetry.
-
-
Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank for your little mens
lisa
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
