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Kittens 'n Cream

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Kittens 'n Cream


Hey diddle diddle! With cream in the middle,
I wish we both had a spoon.
You have a grin on your chinie chin chin,
I better get my share soon.

We’ll both eat our fill and try not to spill;
my tummy feels like a balloon.
We’ll eat every drop until we both flop,
we’ve been eating all afternoon.

 

 

 

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  • xxSomber Havocxx
    May 20

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    so cute. i like it. reminded me of hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle, or how ever it goes. reminded me that altho im still a kid yet act older, that i still have a kid in me


  • Aneka Bellingan
    July 10, 2008

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    Hello Auntie Amera, Do you have cats cause I have a teddy bear cat. I liked the poem mommy had to read it many times. On Monday when the school [called BMC] opens I will take a copy so my directress can read it to the class. Sibo is gonna be there and also like cats as much as me.

    Thank you for sharing your poem with me.
    I love you.
    Anny

    ♥


    • Amera gold member
      July 10, 2008
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      Oh Anny! Thank you for your comment!
      Yes I do have a cat, he's a Bengal and he looks like a Tiger. His name is Saber.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank you for entering this contest!!!

    I really enjoyed reading about your wonderful pair of mischievous cats! I'll bet they're a lot of fun, fun, fun around the house!! Your creative poem is an ode of loving joy, straight from your heart. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Candy6
    June 28, 2008
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    cute


  • Kiran silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    A well deserved gold. This was fantastic, a fovourite with kids I'm sure! brilliant.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    June 27, 2008
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    Excellent Job

    Great childrens poem. I see it won Gold. (Well Deserved).
    Joe


  • HeavensDaughter
    June 26, 2008
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    I love this! It was so fun to read and brought a smile to my face!


  • Pisces Pieces
    June 26, 2008

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    How completely fun and adorable!

    You really are brilliant, and a master at poetry of all types.

    This is such a joy to read...I just want to frame it and hang it on my kitchen wall, everyone would adore it!

    ♥


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 26, 2008
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    Well deserved

    What a light pleasing poem this is, no wonder it won gold.

  • Have left the site
    June 26, 2008
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    Very cute, cuddly and Hallmarkie. You could do greeting cards. Good job to get your award. -Wil


  • Truetome
    June 26, 2008
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    what a dar' poem this is adorable. LOVE, prettypoetry

  • piccola silver member
    June 26, 2008
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    Love it! the rhyme is great and it fits the prompt well. thank you for entering.


  • echo-ink
    June 26, 2008
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    Amera, This was purrecious, I laughed the whole poem through,

    You have magic fingers, mythical hands and quite the imagination. I LOVED THIS.


  • PerVirtuous
    June 26, 2008

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    You have a knack with children's poems. You'll make a fantastic mom someday. Three hopity-hops for you.


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 26, 2008
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    awww thats cute

    x cheeky x


  • StarEyes
    June 26, 2008

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    Sis,

    What a wonderful read this one is! I loved it, and I can see myself reading this to my grandsons... How wonderful is this? Great job as always my sis!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Rose Angel gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Just read this cute funny rhyme to my grandson...It has amused us both..Niece there is nothing you cannot do! And this is another way you have shown your diversity of talent!


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Ah, so cute! What a wonderful little childrens rhyme this would make. Reminds me of a special occasion card, for cat lovers. I'm sure everyone with a kitten would be sold out over this one, Amera.


  • paulcreates silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    Cricketjeff stole my line:
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
    This is SO cute Amera.
    Reminds me of Mother Goose rhymes.

    Paul


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!


  • Lexie - gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    LOL

    This actually reminds me of me and Fire on a chocolate binge LOL
    very very well done, deffinatly gave me a giggle

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