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His Eyes

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Embracing soft, tenderly
I held passion in awe.
Eyes told the story
desires grew deeper,
smiles warmed two hearts
longing; thus becoming
weaker.


Lost within our kisses
washing away
years of pain.
I look into your eyes
knowing I would
never be the same.
Dreams became reality
singing in my eyes.


When I looked at YOU!

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Prompt: Bedroom Eyes

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  • chatelaine
    August 15, 2008

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    Passionately written with devotional love. Much can be seen and felt when looking into the eyes.
    This is very moving
    An excellent poem


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    I love the music of love around the each word of this verse..wonderful indeed..I love it..well done..and my thanks for sharing it...


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Lovely!
    Such romance and soft whispered intimacy in every line...I love this

    Lynda


  • Brazos silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    Beautifully done, my sweet Dawn. The eyes will tell a lot of secrets and convey a lot of passion and emotion, if you will just peer deep enough into them, which apparently you have done. You have penned most excellently, my darling.

    And, not only that, looking in the eyes leave the hands free, eh?

    I love you,
    Brazos


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Wow!

    Beautifully written!
    I can feel this verse as each line seeps love and healing.

    Lost within our kisses
    washing away
    years of pain.
    I look into your eyes
    knowing I would
    never be the same.

    Loved this hun!
    ~Lisa~

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