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Lifeless

 

 

 

Drained -

 

of all

 

emotion...

 

Lifeless! 

 

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I have a medical condition that drains me of life called MMN and family problems, not to mention depression!

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    I hope you feel better soon. I have some type of in-balance in my system... but that just makes my muscles stiffen over (like a juvenille arthritis)

    Good luck with your entry!
    Claire x


  • DeGraw
    June 26, 2008

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    Ditto!

    I suffer from a chemical imbalance and I can really relate. My medication is almost as bad as my illness. My husband is very supportive and that is a blessing. Writing is a catharsis for me. I thank God for my husband and am very happy to have found the family here at AP.
    Sincerely,
    Jennifer

  • karabi
    June 26, 2008

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    Ailments are common to all, but I think that I suffer the most. When I come to know others' sufferings my pain pales into insignificance. I can only pray to God that He may give relief to them. Brevity of the poem has made it very poignant.

  • Bad Bill
    June 26, 2008

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    A poetic hammer-blow of a statement, Sue. Much sympathy concerning your condition. I hope things will eventually improve.

    Take care,
    Bill


  • breedluv gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    Sue-please know that others (like me) keep you in our thoughts.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    i need you to place the cause of the emotion in youe authors notes, or wats going on and such.
    that was a rule.
    then tell me when you do that and I'll comment, lol.
    sorry but rules and rules
    stephanie

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