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~Bedroom Eyes~













Mesmerized from dark eyes
that seem to have an endless
hypnotic way.
Lost in soft touches.
Gaze locked as if chained by magic.
I shiver with feverish overtones
lips quivering in anticipation,
yet I linger frozen lost in the seduction
of your bedroom eyes.




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Prompt~ Bedroom eyes

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  • DeGraw
    June 29
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    Mesmerizing indeed!

    I loved your page so I went on to read. How beautifully you write!
    Regards,
    Jennifer


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 27

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    Wonderful Poem

    What a very romantic poem you have penned. Very nice and seductive imagery. Yes those bedroom eyes get us everytinme. A great poem . Best os luck . Take care,

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • Quiet places gold member
    June 26

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    Romantic!

    Love this poem! Such imagery and emotion! The strength of it draws in your reader as if being a part of it. Excellent! Don