Fusing the flesh
melting the bone.
Chanting as one,
hearts of stone.
Spewing torment
twisted with fear.
Feel rancid breath
as they draw near.
See venom flood,
bubbling so slow.
As each mortals dies,
their power grows
Toneless screams
echo in the night.
Unsheathed anger
flees in fright.
From bloated bowels,
bile swiftly drips.
Torso's gouged
by hungered lips.
Dislocated, contorted,
impaled by death.
Squeezing they grab
every last breath.
Emitting bright light,
watch them all perish,
Burning the innocent
is something to cherish.
Author notes
Picture prompt BETWEEN 10 LINES AND 30 LINES
Credit Artist -- somthing to die for by VHM Alex, from deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Horror..Gore..Give me it all...Pic Inspired #No.4 by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended July 11, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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one i love that picture, and two this was one of your best that i have read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Ooohhh a death march indeed.. with a chanting that would send shivers!!!! Wickedly cool write! You definitely gave the picture life!! Albiet a spooky one!!
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Horror gore give me it ALL...bloody hell YES you did
AWESOMENESS...Brilliant tight rhyming, just so dark....your dark soul reigns again
Thank you and good luck
Cind
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ooh i likey this! the rhyme is perfect,
and the poem is just so well written and all,
its so beautiful,
all my love,
kitty xx
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